using  a  blog   has been     an   intreasted    experience   ,  i  have   never   use    blogger  before .it's easy to keep   track   of  what   i  write  and   have alway  access    to  it    at all time  .   the   difference    between   writting   in  paper and     post it     is    the  confort     of  having   my   work    in  my hands   whenever  i want  .      this semester  has  been     challege    using  the  blooger  website  help  me to see the   progress  of my   writting   how  long  i  written  and  also  the  comment   other  peer  have made  was  guide to see   how to  improve    it  .   i  problably  wouldnt  conseider  to  use it   as a personal   choice    i like to write  in  book  because   i can carry  it  with me   where  ever  i  go .


      Althought   i   dont consider  my self    either   good or   bad   writter    i knw that because   is  part of  the   requierment  to  graduate   english  is     a  subject  i  dont  tpaid to much attention .  i  like to  mostly   free write     i dont like to follw a pattern  and  a  segment  of  rules    when   ever   im writting  for  my  personal  reoasn .  when  it  come to  write   for  class  assigment   i  try to focus  in the assigment   that   it  why idont consider  my self  as  writer   .   waht  i  can xpect   for    english 101   is   more  chaleging   assigment  but  with    same responsabilities .    

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 In  the  movie   gone baby gone    the  main  characters   bring  out  the question what morally   correct  or not the  philosophy  of  all them  is divide  it  in   two consequentialism  and    ethical absolutism     .  patrick   the  protogonigst  belive   in  following    the ethical  morality   is the  best way     to aways  go    regarless of  what the action  and the long term  consequence  may be.  his belive  are  form  beacuse  of his  childhood  as in the begigng of the movie  he mentions     what  a  priest  told him    to always  do what  right even if it doesnt seem .     trou out the movie  he  is involve in  senario that  question  his  belive    on  example    when he shoots    the child molester  in the herad  althought  for  many  of others that was  correct  for him seem to be   wrong   he says   killing    is a  sin    wether  or not  .  althought    it lead him to find the  girl  Amanda  his  again  place in this  senario when   he decide to ruturn the child to her mother  although  she was in   beetter  envierment  than been  with her mother  who  is    an alcholic  drug addict .

   however    the   other  charecter  Angie,  police  captain, lionel  , renny   their   action  lead them   to   believe  in    consequentialism    to   do the  right  decision  doesn t  mean to do what   moraly correct .    In  their intention to look  for what  was best  for Amanda   they  believe  it  was ok   to cover  taht  fact her kidnap was a fraoud .   and  live     away from her mother .   Angie   an  the   police captain are  left  in dispointment     when    she  is  brought  to  her mother .   one examle  is   when angie     confront patric  and tell him   she    is better of    lving with   the captain  becaue she  would have  birthday  parties  slepover    like      normal     girl   this point  is   brought    with the  irony   tht  the police captain was   supoosetly  the one in charge of the  case

   in my opinion  i disagree with the endng     i would  have   left  the child with the  new place  and  have shown the mother  were  she was   insted   of caling the cops  nd   brought her back to the  envierment she was   in the beginging  . althought   it was  the morally correct  it  was not   the  best   decsion   .  at the end helen the mother  is living  the child an  attendent  to go  out     with somebody  .

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     public  hospital  can be  careless  because  of the  large amount of trageries and  circustances  that had   happende  under the  watch  of  doctor and  stuff members  .  in the  newspaper   editorial  the  woman who die  in the  waiting  room  by  jeneen  Interlani . is a clear example  hospital across the  country  have  strugle  to provide  acute phsychiaric  care  to the  poor and   unsured .

               I  could relate  to this  point  very well  . Two year  s  ago   i went to the  emergency room of the Jamaica  Hospital for  chronic  stomach   pains  . since  i  didnt  have   insurrence  at the time   i has  to wait  on hour  to  be  seem   and another to be threat it .many who are under  this  situation are put  to the side in hospital simply because their are not   cover.  hospital  have been lacking   for  over 40 yers  .
as  Esmin   Green   the woman who    die    i nt he waitting  room  many  paittien    as welll die  in  hospital   because   their not    resiving the necessary   attention 
                           
                ironictly   the palce  that   is   suppost to   to be  helpful  is the  one   that is   the  least   whatever  the  reason  maybe     public   help   is    this way    it should never  be careless    not  everybody   can  provide  themselves  with   highter   assistant   from  private  hospital    in   other  countries    help servies    is better fast  and free

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       Althought many argue all law should be follow as it ment by  all   citizenship   given  an   oportunitty  to   achive a highter  education  to does  who deprite of it    it  not  going   going against it .  the  editorial of the   chicago  tribune  pubilshed  "  An education  in citizenship"   .   the illinois  house  pass  a bill that   would  allow   illligal  imigrant  pay  stete tuition  in all the  universities and college of illinois  .  i agree  with  given  the  articele.


although i was not born in this country i grew up and attend it school in here , As i enter college i met many peer who were in the same situation as i was but wti hthe exeption that they had to paid high tuiton because there consider international regarless they have attented school   in   this country as well .  many of them   where  dined   the  many   loans   grant  and finacal   aid   the govement   offfers simply because of their  imigration status , dispite  the fact that their  parent s   paid     federal  taxes    that suppport  ithis  help the  govement   offers to everybody   else.    given  them   state  tuition    rates  it not    depriving   some one  who  is  a  citizen  from     paying    out of state   tuition     but  it     given    something it was promised   in aschool .

               

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    IS  there   equal  opportunities  for  all ?    the article  ‘’An   education  in citizenship “   by  the Chicago   Tribute  (editorial 31  march ,2003 )   stated  the question .Acouring to the  article   the  Illinois   House  r passed   a bill  to allow  iligal    young people    to  pay    in state   tution   rates   at the  Illinois  colleges  and  universities     I  agree   with  thee   proposal   because   for  many   of them     their main  priority    is  to   resive   a  highter   education .

      Advocate    for  immigrant    estimate   there are  3000     youth   in  illinous   who  are    in this    position     . in  which   there    were   born I n  another   country   but raise   in the  USA  the tuition  fee    shouldn’t   be as  an   outside state     ($13.906)    because   as the   advocate   for immigrant  stated  their parents   paid    federal taxes   .  the  true   of the matter    is    the    cost of a  highter  education       is not   about   money    but the hard    effort    everybody  put  to  be  able    to achive their   goal    to become    somebody .

     Another  example   is the  bill  resive     112 -4    votes  to passed    it  in that    most  senators   didn’t  had  problem  to   decide    althought    the bill    have   a lot   of pros and  cons   the  dilemma   have been   brought to  the atteintion   of the   representive  by the  continuously    protest    young   people     who  are  illegal    immigrant   to make the bill pass

                In  conclusion     the  article      bring  out a  situation   that   we are  living   today   is ti   matter    of been  reasonable    or   staying  another  reality ?    

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            The  article  " individuals  in  groups"   adapted  from   "in  groups   we    shirk"  by   Carol Travis    talks  about   the   behaviorial    responses  of  groups   and    individuals /  acoring to the arthour   groups      tent   to  wait  when  it come  to  taking action  then  those who are  alone. I agree    with the   thesis  because   when  you are in  group    you rely  on   another    to lead rathen  than    taking    full responsabily   of  making  decision .

     one  example     coming   to Laguardia     Comuniity  College  wasnt    my first choice .    i  wait  it   to   apply  because  Laguardia  didnt  offeer   the   major  my freind was    intreadted   in  .    it  toked  her and   me    three month  to send college   aplication    to  different   college   .   acouring to the article  Psycholist    call this behavior      difusion of  responsabily     or  loafing .   if      i had  taken the desion to  attetn to college  by my self  i would have acted  right  away     and   not wait   to  attent ed   the folliwing  semster .    When  we  take   desicion  with other  the  difference in opinion  and     point of view can  procrastinate   your    desicions .
          
                      Futher more     our social  skill  can sometimes put  a  hold    on what we   may want to do    .   the article     brings the point of  view  by  seeting examples   done  by  psychologist    in classrooms  . is it   better to be   a lone    or   be in group? this  article   lives  us with the question   to answer  in  our  own opinion.





     

           

allegory of the cave

Allegory  of the Cave      is a  fable     written  by  Plato in  (The  republic   book 7th ). Point  out  the  power   human  mind has  to     adjust to    the  environment   is in  .   the   dialogue  of the   the two   characters   Socretes  and Glaucon    pointing  out  the  life   of  the    slave  that work   in the cave .  the only connection to the  world  is the shadow that  they see   and   voices they hear   from the  back  side   of the  cave .  because they  are  a costume  to  the    shadow   they  don't realize  that  their can easily  escape from  the cave . the   emphasis  of the fable  is      our   surrounding   can easy   blind us from the      reality   

hype

                             The  article   Hype  by Kalle Lars    discuss    how   adverstasment are   contaminating  our mind .    A  clear    example   is    local supermarkets  have   install screen in their shopping carts  , as  well the nozzle  in  gas station  have now  adverising  screen .   acoring to the  article    there   total  amount of  adverticent  on tv   and   display is   203,0000  billion  every year  .  we are  living in        just    a  century ago  children would listen   to cassical   music as  a  sothing  background   nowaday  children   are  fill with    advertice jingle  likethe  mike  miyer   wiiner  song . 

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          Are advertisement company  slowly controling  your  thought? acouring  to kelle lans  from  hype  insigns of life  in the usa  prove  this point. As  we  growth  in  technology advertisement are  spreading everywhere  you go .. there is an  estimate of 12  billion  displayed  ads  ,  3  billion  in  radio  comercial and  more  than  200, 00   tv commercial  in the  usa .  I agree  with  Mrs Lans   point because of the effect it has on our  decition   and  the  effect it  has on  childre.

          Our  desition  are affect  it  by   what we  see   mostly . since  we are  living   an  advance  technology  century  places  like  supermarkets  ,bank  machines  and  highways  are fill  wih   many    of this  manipulated  strageries  to sell  their products.   one example  a company  call  carte display  to screeen   on the  supermarkets  carts to promote more shopping. 

          Another effect  is on  childrens  programs  are fill  with  catchies  songs    and  atractive  product  like   race  cars    jumping  in high  lenth  or most  popular the oscar  mayer song    theme   there are    being   raise  by television   , children are  more  easly influencer  creating  a chain  conection  to increase  the  percesnt  of  consuming   in this  country


           in conclusion     adverticement   company  have   take  over what  we  decide to b uy .